It still isn’t ten syllables per line, and the reflection is vague in some places “the use of similise and hyperbole in the soliloquy allows the reader to feel the emotions and intensity Horatio’s thoughts have at the particular time.” What emotions?? What similies and hyperbole? And she spelt horatio differently throughout the paper. Also said the development method was “inner conflict” which is a requirement but also vague. What inner conflict?