Although the writing style is ok, a large bulk of what he wrote is fundamentally incorrect. Before choosing him as my writer, I asked him multiple times if he is certain he knows how to analyze abstract on a scholarly level. But his lack of terminology reflects that he is not up to par with the proper parlance. Then when requesting a revision, I even took the tome to analyze it myself in layman’s terms and asked him to revise it, hoping he would then have better understanding of the abstract. He didn’t even address the statistical data. It is not possible for me to even extract the analysis to use. What he gave me isn’t even an analyses. I need a writer that is astute in analyzing journal articles.