I am not happy with the paper that has been written the first time and than "revised". I have listed a long note on the first paper submitted of everything that I wanted a correction and things to keep in mind when writing the revision. However, once reading over the revised paper carefully I found that it is the same essay with the paragraphs just rearranged. In addition, I need note that there are far too many repeated sentences and yet there has been no correction to that. As well as the writer has continued to miss the point of the essay by not reading over instructed outline that I had sent over other.