They are not related but used "coom" show respect for elders (Afrikans)
For Oom Piet -gift for her neighbour
message: Importance of showing kindness 10 others.
Finuala Dowling (1962-)
Theme:
Tone:
mood:
Nostalgic
curious
sympathetic
kindnesstempathy
"conversational
When I was least happy in life Lowest point in her life.
my daughter led me across the road
Mother in a dark place and needs more help than she
folind trust in unknown neighbour-Fotth
-Daughrer recognises mom straggling.
to a neighbour whom I did not know
a toddler has no malicious intent only genuinely wams to help. tinnocent)
with the purpose of a toddler
symbotise apartheid regime
who does not see gates and fences
The daughter is innocent ,only 10 help sense of purity &
OPHmistic -sees good in life
goodness.
but the ducks and puppies
more to life than we think.
Blind to descrimination .
Anaphora on the other side. -we just need the blind faith of child to see it.
Directly addressing Oom Pier
-creates dose bond WV him.
onamatypoeia. calm gentle ooice identifying the need for
a calm & gentle approach to injured/hust speaker.
You spoke to me in the same bad-tempered low murmuring tones Allifernation of -slows down
you used for lame horses and bilious dogs.
he is partent and recognises pace.
spokes about ordinary/ plain things Peace of mind
gentle approach needed. snes sad,
Crops, flowers and poultry were our theme:
nature can heal the sow
Gesture OF someone who cares. Compossion.
you made me tea and wiped the counter,
colon indicates what their conoos entailed.
exclamation shows pity
you said 'Foeitog' and don't hope so"
very showing the
He You read guessed. between the lines and surmised what happened Hoping for & what better was & showing needed. support for her.
simplicity of help offered.
You told me I was beautiful, Compliments her -to build her up.
Reperiston (Anaphora) of "you"
in the courtly way of an old man. no alterior motives.
shows she owes everything
to him
compliments her 10 support her build her up, not advance on her.
"He made all the difference.
time has passed Anecdore short story to prooe a point.
One day when it rained Good omen in africa brings life t postrice change. (Blestings hope)
There is a divide between them afriend but not family.
you phoned from your side and said
not asking ,he rells-shous Patherly authority
'I'm sending some ducks for Beatrix
He is Afrikaans and cannot pronounce 'Dearrice'.
- you always called her Beatrix -
Pair of dashes (parenthests) to enclose elaboration
on what 00m Pier said.
out the window we saw them,
imagery of ducks
waddling over, The ducks moved maturally-natural progression.
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