Narrowing The Topic

Name_____Louis asamoah___________________________________________________________________________ Class_________________________________________________________________________________ I Can Narrow My Topic Effectively When you get an idea and start writing, you sometimes discover that the topic is too big! When this happens, writers will sometimes overlook important information. They won’t have time, space, or energy to share details and help the reader understand the meaning of the event. In order to avoid that, make sure your topic is narrowed. You try it: Choose the event you want to use for your personal narrative. Use the graphic organizer below to determine if your topic is too big or too small. I Will Be Writing About: When I got a bad haircut The main point I want to make in my personal narrative is: Why it is so expensive and isn't fair I will begin my personal narrative by writing about: Why they should lower haircuts and make the price go down a little bit I think this will take about____1__paragraphs. In the middle of my personal narrative, I’ll write about: Just for one hair is 25 dollars I mean it's not like I'm asking you to give me a limited-edition haircut. I think this will take about__1____paragraphs. At the end of my personal narrative, I’ll write about: How we should not raise prices just because everything is becoming expensive now a days You should always try to have a heart. I think this will take about____1__paragraphs. The important lesson or meaning I want to share about this event is: It's tough because not everyone is making not making good money right now, But I still don’t see a reason for you to raise the prices up because I have a twin for both haircuts it would be 50 dollars 25 each Witch is a lot of money to me in my opinion. The important lesson is to not raise prices just because you need the money You know how many people Can't even afford a haircut It's just not right to me. I want to include vivid details about these events: I want to include vivid details so it's kind of clear of what I'm trying to say I want to include dialogue at these events in my writing: I want people to also find out about this. I want people to know what I'm trying to do so yes; I want to include dialogue.