Research and Writing - Week 8 Final Persuasive

Introduction Paragraph My topic is on relationships and communications. My position on the topic is that communication is very important while in a relationship as it allows us to communicate and share each other’s interest. While communicating is based on the way we each talk. I chosen this position because it is important to create a safe and exciting secured relationship. We all can learn how to improve our relationship to make the relationship work for the both. Body Paragraph I think communication is important to keep a relationship going is to allow one another to share their interest and concerns. The way our lives make decisions it allows us all to work together. An effective relationship is based on the way we talk, listen and respond. There are many things we can all improve in the way we communicate with our partners. We can also, all organize our lives to make all decisions ( Syrtash). It takes us to create a safe and happy relationship. When a person in a relationship sends the partner a signal it wasn’t intended . It isn’t hard to improve the way we communicate. When you both have lack of communication trust is lost. There is nothing to keep a relationship strong and healthy (Ludden). Once, you have an establish relationship you both may both become familiar with communication in many different ways (Ludden). A successful relationship comes with a ability to rely on someone’s way to communicate. While communication allows one another to share and express the way we feel. In relationships we can express the way we feel (Pande). Organizing our life can allow you and your partner to work together. An effective relationship is based on the way you talk and listen. Communication can be improved by the way we talk (Pande). The concept of relationships is newly used. People have friends, family, sexual partners and business associates. Writing this essay about relationships will teach me a lot about dating and communication and how important communication is. Some people have good relationships and some have bad ones they are all different. Just because one relationship didn’t work out doesn’t mean your current relationship won’t. Communication is the the key to all things without communication there is no relationship. Its many things out there but there is nothing to keep a relationship strong. Once you and your partner have an established relationship and established communication you both can become familiar on how to communicate in many different ways . Communication can involve a lot of things such as talking to friends, family and people in general. Others seem to turn to their spouse, partner and friends when things are not going well so they need someone to talk to for advice. Automatically this tell you how things are going to go. It is very hard to see someone’s mistake not just from looking at them. It is very hard to criticize yourself because no one wants to be wrong or no one wants to criticize their selves. When things aren’t running smoothly in a your relationship we tend to turn to our partner because we figure we can talk about anything. Communication is not complicated once the understanding is there. Understanding the right way to communicate works for you and your partner. Communication can not happen on your own or just with the efforts of one person but with both . A relationship is only complicated if you make it complicated. Act early rather than wait until the situation gets worse ( Better Health Channel). All relationships have there ups and downs but, communication makes it better (Better Health Channel). You can not read your partner mind no matter how well you know them (Better Health Channel). Being open and honest in a relationship with communication is very important in a healthy relationship. We all have to learn about one another this will help you and your partner with better communication. Feedback Reflection Feedback From Activity 3 1.Trying to come up with a strong and effective title for my essay and by concentrating on my audience on writing about love and communication. 2.Finding the right sources for my love and relationship essay. 3.Trying to dig deeper in my draft into the sources to get good evidence on what Im going to write about. How Feedback Was Used My paper will include all things about love and the importance of the relationship and how to communicate. Feedback both positive or negative is helpful when it comes down to writing. How Feedback Will Help With Future Writing My article is about being open and honest in a relationship with communication is very important in a healthy relationship. We all have to learn about one another this will help you and your partner. Being open and honest in a relationship with communication is very important in a healthy relationship. We all have to learn about one another this will help you and your partner with better communication.